下面小編跟大家一起了解雅思寫作練習(xí),希望對(duì)大家的學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。 同類真題衍生: 1. Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it?Give suggestions on how to solve this problem. 2. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 審 題 1. Human activities (所以你的論點(diǎn)論據(jù),應(yīng)該和這個(gè)大前提一致) 2. Too late to take preventional measures 3. Dying out, extinct 4. Improve the situation 首先再次回憶一下,Discuss both views這一類型的題目,我們介紹過很多遍,你需要分別討論兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的合理之處,也即:從這些立場(chǎng)持有人的角度解釋、分析題中列出的不同看法;然后陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。于是問題就來了,大多數(shù)同學(xué)反應(yīng)這道題目的難點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)一:“采取行動(dòng)為時(shí)已晚”,這一觀點(diǎn)好像不太站得住腳啊,其合理性在哪里呢?所以今天主要就解析這個(gè)問題,其余的部分,請(qǐng)各位同學(xué)動(dòng)手練習(xí)。 同樣,文章結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰: 開頭段 主體段一 主體段二 自己的觀點(diǎn)段(結(jié)尾段) View One 重點(diǎn):too late to take measures... 有道理的地方: 背景知識(shí):地球上有幾百萬中生物,每天都是150-200個(gè)物種滅絕(包括動(dòng)物以及植物)。我怎么知道?哈哈哈,查一查聯(lián)合國(guó)、著名環(huán)境組織、科研機(jī)構(gòu)的報(bào)告就知道了。如果你有這個(gè)只是儲(chǔ)備,這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)會(huì)不會(huì)好寫很多呢? 對(duì)于已經(jīng)滅絕或極度瀕危物種,人類的確是無力回天的(回憶前幾天報(bào)道我國(guó)**的一只什么烏龜,精人工授精無效而亡,就是這個(gè)意思) 很多情況下,破壞容易拯救難:人類很多行為對(duì)動(dòng)植物的賴以生存的環(huán)境造成了不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的破壞,這些環(huán)境問題:要么無法復(fù)原、要么復(fù)原起來需要耗費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間、金錢和精力。參看第2點(diǎn):但是動(dòng)植物的滅絕速度等不及啊,該滅絕還是會(huì)滅絕,于是乎,這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性是不是就清楚了? View Two 自行思考吧~ P.S. 今日大文章分享的大熊貓保護(hù)研究就是一個(gè)很好的例子呀~ Causes & Solutions 不作為的原因: 技術(shù)難度大,對(duì)于已經(jīng)滅絕或極度瀕危物種,人類的確是無力回天的 花費(fèi)過大,財(cái)力、人力耗費(fèi)過大 大眾整體的意識(shí)依然不高,所以導(dǎo)致決策*無法充分 讓步:結(jié)合第二點(diǎn),雖然意識(shí)到這一事實(shí)或現(xiàn)象,依然因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)實(shí)原因選擇不作為 解決方案: 鼓勵(lì)科研、加大科研投入 籌款籌資(基金會(huì)、大公司、眾籌等等)、合理進(jìn)行預(yù)算規(guī)劃 提升大眾愛護(hù)環(huán)境、保護(hù)動(dòng)植物的意識(shí) *積極承擔(dān)責(zé)任 WritingSample 1 (Too late to...) The view that it is too late to save animals and plants from extinction is not without merit. Frist and foremost, there are millions of species on our planet, and according to scientific research, an average of 150 to 200 species disppear from the earth on a daily basis. For such already extincted or immediately dying species, it can be indeed too late to take any effective actions. For certain extremely endangered animals or plants, the actual effects of human intervention can be very limited. This is not to ignore the fact that, animal and plant protection generally requires a comprehensive and systematic reaction plan, which means the process can be lengthy, demanding and costly and not keeping up with the extinction rates of the dying species. (128 words, 一、個(gè)尚未完全擴(kuò)展的主體段)
WritingSample 2 (causes) Nowadays, a great number of species become extinct as a result of irresponsible humans’ activities. Very little, however, has been done to improve or alter the situation. I will discuss the reasons behind such inaction and provide several suggestions to solve this problem. The first factor explaining such inaction is perhaps associated with technology and research. Protecting species from dying out actually preconditions robust research in related fields. Current scientific development, however, remains inadequate to save many species from extinction. The second reason is also a realistic one: protection of the endangered animals and plants usually requires tremendous investment, both financially and logistically. Budgetary shortage and human resources deficiency further contribute to the government's indifference to the dire situation. Also, lack of awareness from the general public may worsen this situation. Insufficient public awareness not only makes the government less pressured to take action, but may also government's work more challenging, as the general public will be non-cooperating. (158 words,一個(gè)主體段)